Wednesday, April 22, 2020
Tuesday's Writing.
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Hi, my name is Malakai and this is my writing from Tuesday. This writing we had to write a letter from a robot's perspective to his parents because he got dropped on earth. If you see any grammar or spelling mistakes please tell me in the comments below. Bye Bye
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Hi Malakai
ReplyDeleteHahaha great story. The earth would be a very strange place to land right now for Minnie! There would be no one around. Remember to use the Think 6 before you publish so all your punctuation is fixed. One thing I found is: human beans - it should be human beings! Human beans would be scary!!! That would make a good picture though Malakai, maybe you could draw one! Mrs Pascoe
Hi there Malakai
ReplyDeleteImagine if we got dropped off to another planet, how scary would that be? I'm not surprised that Minnie robot wants to come home. I like how you signed off your letter with "love from your loving son", showing how much you wanted to come home. Remember to take the time to proof read! Great work Malakai.