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Friday, November 20, 2020

Why we should be able to pick when to go to bed

 



What time do you go to bed? 
Hi people this is my writing from a while back. 
Tell me if you find any mistakes

1 comment:

  1. Talofa lava Malakai, My name is Jeremiah and I am from Waikowhai Primary School. I am a year 5 in Waitemata. I like how you explained why you should go sleep when you want to because honestly, I agree that we should go sleep when we want to. This reminds me of when I go to sleep because I try to go sleep as late as possible and I also hear sounds when I wake up, Maybe next time, You could add more detail in or add a conclusion because It said Conclusion but I never saw one. If you actually got to pick when you go to sleep, what time would you choose? Anyway thank you for sharing your learning with me, If you want you can visit my blog and comment on one of my blog post, Just copy and paste this URl :http://wpsjeremiaht.blogspot.com/ anyway have a great day or night and blog ya later

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