Friday, April 17, 2020
Thursday's Writing
Have you eaten a turkey before? If you have please tell me in the comments below. Hi, my name is Malakai and this is my writing from Thursday. This was a fun piece of work. If you see any spelling or grammar mistakes please tell me in the comments below. Otherwise Bye Bye
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Hahaha! That is a very funny story! I have eaten turkey before, but I always find it a bit dry and I have to chew and chew. Your story was great but I found some of it hard to read because of the background, maybe you could highlight behind the words.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Malakai
ReplyDeleteI liked how you used humour in your story. I prefer chicken to turkey because I think it is juicier. Proof reading is your friend in writing because it will improve the overall presentation and impact more on the reader. Take the time to do this next time, ka pai.