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Friday, April 24, 2020
Wednesday's Writing
What is your favorite book? tell me in the comments if you have got one. Hi, my name is Malakai and this is my writing from Wednesday. My favourite book is Charlie and the chocolate factory. If you see any grammar or spelling mistakes please tell me in the comments below. Bye Bye
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Hi Malakai
ReplyDeleteMy favourite book is ummm, lets see, I don't really have one. I liked The Twits when I was younger and books by an author called Paul Jennings. As an adult I like books by James Patterson- murder/ mystery novels. Charlie and the Chocolate Factory is a great story. I noticed a couple of errors. invention instead of 'invenor' and the name of someone/ title needs a capital letter. Just remember to always proof read your work and blog post.
Hi there Malakai
ReplyDeleteCharlie and the Chocolate Factory is a great book, it's so entertaining. Have you seen any of the movies? I think there are two versions, one with Johnny Depp. I like reading biographies and autobiographies because I find people's real stories so interesting. As a teacher I love reading Paul Jennings quirky short stories to kids. Remember to proof read your work, super effort!